Leda and the Swan redrawn

I wasn't completely happy with the drawing in the post below, so I re-envisioned it today. I'm not sure this version is better, but it is lighter & underdrawn as opposed to overdrawn, I suppose. Somewhere between the 2 is the ideal version...


Leda and the Swan, 2010, brush & ink on paper, 11" x 8.5".